作文题目:Resonance 得分:87 排名:20 修改:8 历时:4天6小时16分,分数增加:7分

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第1版 提交时间 2015-02-03 17:36:35 分数:88 字数:148

My favorite book is < The adventure of Tom >.It's wrote by Mark.It's about a boy called Tom.At first,he is naughty and rude.He lives in his aunt's family.He has wholeheartedness friends and carefree life,he plays everyday.But after he goes through a train of things ,he becomes a ripe ,successful and rich man. I like this book one hand because it's interesting and observes the colorful world with the point of view of a child. It's storyline is excited,it's characters' disposition are unique.The other hand,across this book ,I can see different people's attitude for their lives.So I like it very much. From this book,I know that:If you want to be successful,you have to be brave,firm and the most important factor is to defeat the fear in your mind.

最终版 提交时间 2015-02-07 23:51:56 分数:94 字数:221

< Adventure of Tom Sawyer >, the novel I liked the best, which was produced by Mark Twain who was an American author and the novel was about an American teenager who was called after Tom. Although Tom was naughty and uncivil who operated for his aunts, the person who made several wholeheartedness friends and an unconstrained life, he was joyful every day. Nonetheless he grew into a ripe, successful and rich man after he had got through a series of things which were happiness and sadness coexistent. It was the writer on his childhood memories. I gratified for this book not only because it was fascinating and inspecting this colorful world in the view of a child and its story line was memorable and characterization was distinct but also I really understood different people's varied attitude of their life from the novel, furthermore I admired Tom's and so on and so rich and colorful experience, so I was deeply attracted by the book and dream of Tom's experience to realize the dreams in my soul what to live every day to the fullest. I acquired after reading the book: Supposing you wanted to be successful that you had to be valiant and firm and upright and it was one of the most important elements that always were up for any unexpected adventure.

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My favorite book is < The adventure of Tom >.
2015-02-03 17:58:30 版本:3 得分:87.34
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My favorite book is < Adventure of Tom >.
2015-02-03 18:17:08 版本:4 得分:87.9
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He has several wholeheartedness friends and carefree life, he plays joyful every day .
2015-02-03 18:17:08 版本:4 得分:87.9
He has several wholeheartedness friends and takes carefree life, he plays joyful every day.
2015-02-03 18:19:47 版本:5 得分:88.97
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He has several wholeheartedness friends and takes carefree life, he plays joyful every day.
2015-02-03 18:19:47 版本:5 得分:88.97
He has several wholeheartedness friendship and suffers carefree life so he plays joyful every day.
2015-02-03 18:22:02 版本:6 得分:89.01
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